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Predator ooman

"Love the story, humor and fraught with spicy interspecies male female interaction. Who knew? Just a thought author uses "lie or lied" as in something placed on. I wonder if "lay, lain or laid" wording more smooth? Perfect regardless as meaning clear and flowing."

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