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Second impression

"This was my first book I read on this app and immediately made me fall in love with the book and the writer but I'm still sad that I could not finish the book because of price tags and all but on the short run this book has been my best."

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Can't wait for book2

"Thank you for this book author. I like the plot of this story,I don't know how this story is going to end....but i'm sure it's going to be marvelous. Look forward to book 2. Keep up the good work author😉"

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Second Impressions

"Edgy! Family against each other! Secret enemies! Can’t wait for the next book! Thank you for sharing! ❤️❤️❤️"

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Fun read with an unpredictable plot

"I am enjoying the development of the characters of this story. The plot twists and turns in unexpected ways, making me look forward to reading the next chapter time and time again."

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Second impressions

"goretti12003: i really want to know the ending. And what jappens with Archibald and Darius. Does Darius stake his claim or does Archibald win over with his sweet and thoughtfulness"

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Good story build up and development

"Not the same story as everyone else. Exciting characters. Builds up the storyline nice and steady. Gives you a rush because it is not predictable. The author keeps true to her storyline and not influenced by comments. Did not catch any grammar mistakes "

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Second impressions

"Love the sequel tension "

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Looove

"Morrreeee please ❤️❤️ "

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Amazing!

"Give people what they want! We often think the same plot or similar plots make for a boring repetitive story, that is not the case here. This author captivates you with the character build, dynamics and descriptive imagery! I am absolutely obsessed and need the ending to this before I begin to have heart palpitations. There are some little hiccups with grammer, however, this does not tae away from the story, the flow, or the excitement. Keep up the great work my fellow Venezuelan/Miamian. "

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Loveit

"I love this story. Cant wait for what will happen next. Hopefully the next chapter will be updated soon"

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Love this book!

"I’m personally invested in this story I love the characters and the rhythm of the story! I can’t wait to see what happens next!"

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Second Impressions

"I am so enjoying this story, and can't wait for more updates. Olivia is so relateable and clumsy and funny. Love her character and the interesting characters she has to encounter is refreshing, just lots of fun reading this book, keep up the good writing!!"

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second impressions

"i love this book please give us more"

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Thank you!

"Thank you for your hard work and this amazing story ! I'll wait for next chapter :) "

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Second impressions

"Overall, it's good"

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Start

"I hope Olivia and Sarah leave all behind and start a new life, for both of them. It's looking like they are hiding something and Alexander it's hiding something bigger . Hope they find theirs ways. Ty. "

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Second impressions

"Great suspense! "

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I love this book!

"I really love this book and I can’t wait for more chapters! Ollie is such a bold character that can easily handle a man like Darius and will doon bring him to his knees."

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Very good

"I really love how the book is going. Tag me in the next chapter please "

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Mrs Helen

"Love the story so far.. Clever way of writing a story "

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