His Captive🔞{Short Story}

ktkirata: The story is really interesting. How the character described in the story is like you can see them and picture how they move, talk and feel in the every plots. Well done writer and keep it up.

Catherineb83: Story good just would have liked her not to wear a mask

Teresa: The book is well done, brilliant in fact! Z

Jeanne: A lovely story without endless drama. Just 2 people finding each other. Truly enjoyable. Goal achieved! Thank you.

Melissa: I like the nice wolves. I don't like the redundancy of her self loathing.

Jessica Lee: Such a good read! Stayed interesting and a happy ending. Didn’t leave me hanging

Sami13579: Good plot interesting

Kimberly: It's nice to have a great book that you can simply melt into. There's a touch of drama but not so much that it's jarring. There's a touch of spice but not so much that you'd be ashamed at recommending it to your mother. The characters have you both chuckling and rolling your eyes at the same time. ...

Tracey K.: Loved the give and take between the characters with ups and downs and a happy ending. You did well, keep writing. Tracey K.