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Off limits

"Great story. Had it's shares of ups and downs, unexpected turns, but in the end, turned out great. I felt immersed and could picture it as if it was watching a movie. Author did well."

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I love everything about this story🤭

"I love everything about this story,it’s just so perfect,I would recommend to my buddies,I don’t want it to end,I love love 🤭🥰"

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Wonderful Coming of Age Story

"I loved this story as it draws out all of the emotions. I loved the close relationship of the characters had and the struggles and doubts they overcame with each other."

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Lovely

"It's a lovely story so far "

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Simple, beautiful

"Simple, beautiful story with very relatable emotional situations. I enjoyed it very much."

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Off limits🙅❤️

"The book was amazing 😁Dylan and Jace gave me butterflies through out the whole book 😍..I simply loved everything about it"

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Off limits

"Sad but beautiful story. 😍😍"

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Love

"I absolutely love this so far"

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Off limits

"Couldn't put it down!!! Very entertaining reading. Thank you. "

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Off limitd

"This book is perfect, I don't care who says what. Very few cuss words, totally appropriate for I think all ages. I loved it, read it in 2 days. Keep up the amazing work, Love ya all 🥰👍"

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Off limits - Amazing!!!

"I loved all of the characters and their development throughout the book!! I love all the little twists in the plot!!! Overall, this was an amazing read and an incredible book!!! Keep up the good work ❤️❤️❤️"

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Off limits

"This was amazing! I loved the story. Also I liked that it was easy to follow the story line:) Writer- keep it up🤩"

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Nice work

"This is a good one "

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Off limits.

"Recommended for young people really. There were several lessons shared by the story as well wisdom, life strategies, self improvement and smart mindset. Thank u author. "

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Good story

"Nice and easy to understand. No dragging of plot. "

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It's a great story, reminds me of the younger me

"Well done, the story had me in tears in most chapters, would like to read more of your work. "

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Heartwarming

"I enjoyed reading this. Lighthearted and simple."

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Off-limits

"Great book. I really enjoyed reading it and following the story of the Anderson family and their friends. Well done author🥳🥳"

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Little bit rushed

"The story was little but rushed and it jumped too much. I don’t really remembe Dylan’s ex name but one time she liked him and the other sec she didn’t put any effort. I feeel like jace and Dylan got there feelings too fast. Another question how did the kids forgive the dad so vastly cause maybe he could be lying about the fact that she didn’t allow him to meet the kids. Other than that it was good book "

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