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amazing

"I love ur boook so far, find your grammar (pretty much like mine) funny ( personal, everyone makes silly mistakes or oversee their grammer? but still an upcoming fan of yours. tip: if you dont use it already, put grammeraly on your tech."

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Perfect .suxh a cute story...the twins are hottie....and alpha liam is so cari g....hope she recovers soon

"Perfect .suxh a cute story...the twins are hottie....and alpha liam is so cari g....hope she reco"

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Mated to the Alpha Twins

"I can't wait to read the next chapter of this book, thank you"

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Loving it

"I love the story, it’s sad that she went through all of this, but she’s strong… author you have great skills and an amazing way of writing the story, i Know it needs some editing on the grammar department but I also understand you’re studying and doing this on your spare time… keep up the good work and good luck on your classes. "

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Twin mates

"Its a really good book, rheir are a few grammer mistakes bit over all im glad I read the stories. Thank you"

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Mated to the Alpha Twins

"I love the story. Just one thing in the first few chapters the word mourn is misspelled. Keep with it. Good luck!"

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Omega mated to twin alphas

"I love the story so far so please keep it going. I can't wait to read the rest of the story."

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Mated to Alpha Twins

"I am Loving your book and am excited to see what happens đź’ś "

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Keep going

"I get trying to put the story on “paper” before you lose your thought process. I would suggest quotation marks for conversation would be helpful. Otherwise this story had a lot of potential. Keep writing "

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Mated to the Alpha Twins

"I'm enjoying it so far, yes spelling mistakes, yes chapters are taking a bit longer to come out due to school, but I think it's going well!"

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Nice story

"Let's see what happens next"

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Mated to the Alpha Twins

"I dont like the raped scene. The author could avoid it but she does not use her brain. I will recommend it to my 2 friends only. Her rate cannot be improve. Her story tellung kind of sucks"

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Good book but bad grammar

"No punctuation, terrible spelling. But it was a good story but have loved to have a few more chapters after 24 instead of being left hanging"

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Poor girl

"All because she has two different eyes"

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Mated to the Alpha Twins

"Definitely recommend to my friends and family, so far this book is good"

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Fated

"Okay so far "

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Twins slpha

"Thanks for easy reading"

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Twin alphas

"I like the plot but not so much the way it’s all done in third person view she does include mentioning what wolf thinking in a third person view but would rather her from wolf and guys view personality "

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Aaaaaaa

"I love the story but could you take a few minutes to read over your work before you post it, also can you punctuate and if you don’t know how to write a dialogue look it up please oh and you do a lot of jumping around can you try to work on how the story flow "

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