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hooked

"i cant wait for book 2 i hope she doesn't take this out on Ryker and works with him to check out all his men and kill the ones not loyal to Ryker regardless of who he chooses to date. i want axel to realize that kids more than likely isn't his and kill the bitch i want lil with both axel and Ryker!! ❤️ hope we get book 2 soon id love to see this series continue on for awhile i love all the characters"

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Need more!

"Waiting on the next part. What a cliff hanger! Love the book!"

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Fun read

"Wanted something short and fast to read! Loved it left me in suspense but it was worth the time! I’m rooting for Ryker!!! "

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Nice story

"Strong girl like her so much"

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Great Story

"This is a great story, with Lil being a strong female lead"

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The Fighters

"Im loving this book so far, and when she killed her own father I was stunned, I hope there will be more "

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The fighters (book#1)

"Well done!! Loved it!! Thank you for sharing your story with me "

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The Fighter

"I love this story so far. As soon as it's completed I'm letting everyone I know who enjoys reading all about this story. Great job!"

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Amazing

"Was a great book very excited at where it left off. I alike that it didn’t follow traditional mafia books so it was defo different for me to read"

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Men!!!!!!!!!!

"Axel is insane "

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Review.

"I love love this story!!! I feel that this is one of the beat storys I've read kn the app! To the writer I love this book if you make more books like this I'll be sure to read them. Keep up the amazing work!"

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Awesome 😎

"Let me get it done"

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Its a good read

"Its a good gun read looking forward to the next chapter "

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Wow

"Wow just wow I love this I need book 2 lol would recommend to everyone it's amazing book 2 is needed I am hungry for more lol"

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MARRY THE MAFIA?

"I love the plot of this story and the characters in it, I can't wait until book 2 comes out! I hope she chooses Axel in book 2."

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Top

"Nice book, had fun reading it. Can't wait for the second one ❤️"

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It was OK

"The author would write in a different language and would not put it in English of what was said. I couldn't read anymore, it was bothering me"

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Desperate need of editing

"The spelling and grammar are too distracting, and the use of another language without a translation is just pointless. I wanted to like this plot more, but it was confusing at times with so many side characters. Additionally, I found myself skipping parts because of the over-describing of clothing, makeup, and features. Do I need to know how she styled her hair for school and her entire outfit in order to enjoy the plot? No. No sequel as of yet, so who knows what happened. "

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