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Appereciation And Commission Request.!

"Just finished your story and I have to say it was truly compelling. Your characters felt alive and well-developed. I’m a comic/manga/Webtoon artist currently taking commissions (covers, pages, scenes). If you ever want to turn any part into visuals, I’d love to collaborate. Let's connect on Discord: flemingmichelle28"

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Fall Asleep

"Not bad. I have to admit its only chapter 2, but it hooked me already. I can't wait to see more"

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So Far So Good!

"Overall I think the story is going to an interesting place. Because there's only a prologue I can't write much about the plot, but the topics brought up make me feel like this is going to be a great story that all point to a deep character that I hope gets explored further. There are a few errors in terms of grammar but overall I like the writing style, it's mysterious and is fitting for the kind of story I think this is going to be. Keep writing author! I'd love to keep reading!"

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