What is your opinion?
More to the story
"I enjoyed the lead in with the first chapter. Is it the start of a story? Is it in the middle? The second chapter, I was engaged. The author created an ongoing back story as the plot evolves. I felt the author created good visuals without over describing, as well build on the mentality and f the main character. The suspense was well written. As far the ending? The author allowed the reader to create their own perceptions of the outcome. I would like to see the story continue. "
Orion-6
"slow beginning, but found myself engrossed at the 2nd chapter. character development is interesting, needs more. couple of small spelling/grammar nitpicks. looking forward to more of this one."
Thought provoking work.
"Orion 6 by B. Brooks is an account of a search and rescue operation of a luxury space cruiser on an unexplored distant planet. Unlocking the mystery of what happed to the “Sun Moon” has been assigned to Commander Rusty Fordrup and crew. What they encounter and the soul suppression required to complete their mission digs into the core of those who lead and react. "