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Absolutely amazing

"I enjoyed this a lot. I'd definitely recommend this to all romance and vampire lovers. "

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Love!

"Really well written, enticing plot, and great characters! Jun is likeable and not your stereotypical "morally gray" Alpha-type who doesn't care about consent. This is the kind of love story I like reading because it doesn't glorify abuse, which I see so often in this genre. Lilly is a strong female character without being portrayed as having no faults or weaknesses, which is amazing because women are complex and even strong women need help sometimes, just as strong men do, so I love your very real, honest characterizations of people. The plot in and of itself is interesting and exciting, I love the world building and think it's very well done. The writing style is beautiful and draws you in. There are a few grammatical/spelling errors here and there, but nothing you wouldn't catch with a couple proofreads and it doesn't take away from the story. Overall, incredible job and keep up the good work!"

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Purebred & power

"This was an extremely interesting book. Different from what I normally read. I find it filled with lots of unexpected twist especially the end. Grammar was almost perfect tone was great in most setting. I like itv& will definitely recommend. Great job!"

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Purebreds and Power

"I like it very much "

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Excellent

"This is an excellent book. Much better style and technique than most that are on here. I definitely hope there will be more to the story."

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Awesome

"Such a good story. Keep going "

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Good so far!

"Overall, I think you have something really good going here! I like the addition of vampires here in a more classic format (gives me Dracula vibes, which is one of my favourite books) so really great job with that! The characters and their relationships keep the story moving forward, and I'm excited to see what happens with Lilly. I think there's a lot of potential for that relationship and you play with that very well. The only thing is - I get that they're vampires and such, but there was a lot of sex going on, and it threatened to overload scenes at times. You can still have those undertones there, because I can see the vibe you're going for, but I'd suggest toning it down just a little bit. But that's just me, you do what you think is best as an author - it's your story after all :) I liked your writing style, at times I think things moved just a little fast and it was a little hard to get oriented among everything going on - I'd suggest slowing down just a little bit at times, and that'll help us get even closer to the characters! I didn't notice any grammar mistakes as far as I could tell. But overall, I had fun reading this! Great job :) "

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