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my circuit's dead

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Summary

lost in aesthetics, wandering about the hills of the abandoned land, as a wayward son. this is ground control to major tom, my circuit's dead, there's something wrong.

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
2
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

Peculiar

Peculiar is not me,


It's the way I gazed down
My mask misunderstood my smile
And thought a frown

That's what is,
and how I seemed flattered
At how you missed letters
Obvious marks, a song to a toddler

The way I thought your stupidity cute
Smiled again at your perfect suit

The childish innocence
Got the most decent of me

Peculiar is, how I forgot myself

The way I left to receive your self


Embrace you, although

I was broken to mirrors

Who mirrored my actions to one another


Peculiar, I went to catch

A vision of you, and failed to grasp

You were gone, missed my match
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