Don't Turn (Around) by R at Inkitt
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Don't Turn (Around)

Summary

Don't Turn around Niki. She had told herself Fanfic where Niki and Jack successfully kill Tommy.

Genre
Other
Author
R
Status
Ongoing
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

Chapter 1

Don't Turn Around Niki

. That's what Niki was telling her self right after she

killed

TommyInnit. Her partner, Jack, was cheering. She should've been cheering too, she had finally killed Tommy, the kid that caused everything on the SMP. But deep down she wished she hadn't.


She killed the kid she had thought of as an annoying little brother. She smiled softly remembering the times they would bake sweets together and how Tommy would make a big mess and say he's a 'Big Man's.


Her face went netural again. She looked over at Jack, who was still cheering. She knew she should look back, but she just couldn't. She turned her head towards Jack.


"Are you not happy that we finally killed him?"


Niki smirked, "Of course I am! Why wouldn't I be?"


Jack laughed, "Alright then. We should at least move his body."


Niki frowned, "Why can't we just leave it here?"


"Everyone would be suspicious if he just disappeared, it would be easier to put him some where near L'Manburg."


She nodded, she them realized she would have to turn around.


She turned around and looked at Tommy's body, he was still leaking blood from the stab wound. Niki had stabbed him with the same diamond sword Philza had stabbed Wilbur with. Once when she was at Phil's, while he wasn't looking she quickly grabbed and hid it from where it hung.


Niki looked at Tommy's face, his face showed Confusion, Sadness, Betrayal, and hurt. Niki grabbed Tommy's head while Jack grabbed his feet. They walked all the way to L'Manburg, they put him where Wilbur's memorial was.


They layer him down. Niki layed the sword next to him.


Niki looked over to Jack, "You ready to go?"


Jack nodded, " Let's not tell anyone, let's let them figure it out first."


Niki agreed.




----------a few days later--------____



Niki was at a syndicate meeting, she was drinking some tea. The meeting was interupted by Tubbo who came in sobbing and saying something they couldn't understand. Niki put her mug down while Phil and Techno hurried Tubbo over to a chair.


Phil was the first to ask, "What happens Tubbo?"


Tubbo looked at him, "Tommy's dead." Tubbo kept crying.


Everyone besides Niki looked shocked.


"Do you know how he died?" Techno asked Tubbo.


Tubbo nodded, "He was killed with the sword that killed Wilbur."





To Be Continued……

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