Nice read

"Great concept man! I like how a few people in this world can create monsters using only their imagination; it’s something I’ve always wanted to do! The oppression and pain that the Borges inflict on the citizens is extremely cruel and I’m glad you were able to communicate that effectively. It helps me understand why Anthony hates them so much and I totally share his sentiments. I also love the casual banter between Philip and Anthony and how you’ve described their friendship. It’s heartwarming to see how they care for each other so much and how they try to help one another. Overall, great concept, and a very well-written story. I would say that you could work a little more on character development, because besides his skills, Anthony stays almost the same throughout the story. But I loved reading the first 10 chapters of this novel and I'm going to finish it soon!"