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What is your opinion?

Seriously?

"Dude, it's called fanfiction. Besides, I started writing this before Deathly Hallows was even released, and "8th book"? That play is just fanfiction that Ms. Rowling signed off on. Criticism is great but make sure it's constructive. "

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"wasted time sadly it had potential tho ok writing to much cursing some of ur facts need to be accurate accourding to the 8th book voldimorts kids was born in the seventh year eh"

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