What is your opinion?
The Cloaked in Aerilon
"I really like the imaginative plot! The characters are really well created! The introduction, "Move faster, you good for nothing girl," is really captured my attention! There are some grammar errors but the plot is really good! Keep up your great work!"
Fast Paced and Action Ready
"The characterization is very well done. I have an immediate understanding of the personalities of each character and they all come across as individuals. I would like to see more elaboration on the events that take place, especially in the beginning chapters, it would help get a grasp of the world and emotionally connect to Ophelia. So far it’s a faced paced story that draws the reader in to see how everything will unfold."
It's catchy
"I like Ophelia's character and it hurts that she would go through pain. The story is amazing, it would actually make a good film adaptation lol. Keep it up."
A fun read!
"Although there were some grammatical issues throughout the story, it became more and more engaging as I read. I believe you have some real talent for writing and storytelling, and I'm interested to see where this goes for Lia and anyone she meets along the way."
