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Hooked on the Story... Just Wish It Continued

"The plot was engaging, and the individual characters were well done. I do think adding the character’s name at the start of perspective changes would help the flow—it would make those transitions feel smoother and easier to follow. There were also a couple of spots where the story jumped scenes pretty abruptly, and just a bit more transition would really polish it overall. That said, I genuinely enjoyed the book and found myself moving through it quickly. I’d love to see the author continue the story, though I’m a little worried that might not happen since it looks like it hasn’t been updated since 2021."

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Great book thus far

"I’m really enjoying this book, it has a good story line characters are good and we all know there is no good story with out the villains lol. I can’t wait to see what else happens"

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Alpha Kade

"I love this book and hope to read the next part soon. I can’t wait to see what happens next."

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Kerri Burch

"I like the story "

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Stella

"Great name love it "

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Alpha kade

"Loved it!!! Amazing read thank you for sharing your story with me "

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Love It!

"Loving this so far. "

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New chapter please!!

"I can’t wait for the next chapter😍"

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Alpha Kade

"Loving this story so far. More please..."

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Alpha Kade

"I really liked the plot of the story. Also, how each character has been portrayed in detail. Can't wait to read the rest."

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Great read

"Can’t wait to see where the story goes. So good so far. Unexpected twists"

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Alpha Kade

"Can’t wait for the next chapters to come out! "

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Alpha Kade

"Am really enjoying the story so far. Has all sorts going on. Keeps you guessing what will happen next. "

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Alpha Kade

"I simply cannot wait to see where Carter, Ash, Kenna and Stella end up the suspense is hanging in the air! What is coming next? More please…"

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Alpha

"Love it so far can't wait to read more it's a really good book I would recommend it to anybody"

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Good story

"I would recommend this book to friends and family "

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Alpha Kade

"Eagerly awaiting more! Can’t wait to find out what happens next!"

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Great Story

"Looking good so far. Lots of details. Can’t wait to finish reading! "

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Alpha Kade

"I'm glad that Stella and Carter felt sparks when they kissed and I also hope that Kenna and Ash are mates that would be so cool they all deserve to be happy"

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Alpha Kade

"Very well written. I'm enjoying the story. All ages would like it. The best part is that it is easy to read. I'm not having to overlook grammar and wrong words. "

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