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Paris, blood, and the vampire’s lament

"This slow-burn historical fantasy has me hooked. Karl’s century-spanning stroll through Paris feels like a dreamy, blood-kissed fairy tale—equal parts old-world charm and unspoken hunger. The bank scenes crackle with tension, the club nights thrum with quiet chaos, and every flashback feels like a secret the vampire’s been hiding for ages. He’s no generic bloodsucker, but a lonely ghost haunted by his own immortality. 10/10, I’d follow this cursed count anywhere."

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Amazing

"Thank you for this amazing storie. I couldn't put it down. A fresh view. Loved it. It can use some editing. I rruly hope you will continue writing. You have an amazing way of telling it sucks you in and doesn't let go. "

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Excellent

"Very inventive story. History woven with lord and mystery. Keeps the reader engaged. Looking forward to the continuation of the plot. "

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Gripping

"I would like to see this in a movie. Can I finish reading now? "

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Raveners

"This is a fantastic story and well written can hardly put it down "

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Lovin it!

"Fresh view on a timeless love. I hope this ends well "

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The Raveners

"The Setting was applicable to the characters, and it was a fantastic story the theological concepts were pretty interesting and the themes were intriguing The author use the POV which the readers can feel, the characters all had a good back story It was a hooking story, and one of the unique book that I have read. This story was a fantastic and I hope to read more about the characters in the future!"

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Awesome

"This was an awesome book a real page turner couldn't put it down . The characters all had a good back story . I love these kind of books and would read it if you decided to write a follow up book . Excellent work "

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Amazed and Enthralled

"There is not a moment in this book where you think...let me stop now. this book cast a spell that compels you to finish it. in the end...you just hope and pray that may it turn out to be a series and the author keeps writing more and more. Let's just say this books makes me want to be selfish ,so that I can read more of this."

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Unique and thrilling

"It is one of the most unique stories I have recently read. Kind of a mix of vampires and Dan Brown. Hours of first class entertsinment. A must read. I hope it will get a sequel and that jappens soon."

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I'm really enjoying this!

"I swung by because I thought... oh.. free book from a writer I follow.... and I LOVE it! I'm sucked in! I really like the plot so far. Already had an 'I wasn't expecting that!' moment, which always makes a book for me. I can really see the action- like it's a movie I'm watching. Can't wait to finish the whole thing, but I thought I would leave this now."

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"The beginning , the first 3 chapters are challenging, but after those you get drawn in the story and you want to know more and how it will evolve. "

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Gripping

"This plot will drag you with it. Highly entertaining read, though a bit distracting in grammar/typos; nothing that won’t be fixed in future editing though, I’m sure. Can’t wait into see where this author goes!"

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Nubian

"Good enough"

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The Raveners

"Will there be a second book? It feels incomplete."

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Could not stop reading...

"This book is a great read. I can't wait for the next one (I hope there is another). Like my title I could not put it down! It has just the right amount of drama, actions and wow moments. I also love it when the person you least expected becomes the hero. A few grammar errors but overall a great book."

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Amazing!

"This was a fantastic story! I loved the twists and turns. The theological concepts were pretty interesting and the themes were intriguing! A few grammatical errors and some slower parts, but overall it was an amazing read which kept me up for some late nights because I couldn't put it down! I hope to read more about the characters in the future!"

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Would I buy this book?

"I am a ravenous reader (pun intended) and rarely buy a book from an unknown author unless it comes highly recommended from a trusted source, or the sample chapters were incredibly compelling. If this book had not been free, I would not have read past the first chapter. The typos and other errors would have dissuaded me. Several chapters in, and I was thoroughly hooked. The characters were engaging and the plot was original. I devoured this book and if the author writes a sequel, would be willing to buy it."

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