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What is your opinion?
Of Fables and Seers
"Jungle Book Re-imagined! Blurbs are usually my first point of critique whether a book is interesting or not. Red Fang is THAT book. From the mention of the Aztecs to a boy named Fang, everything is well thought-out. I'd love to see Takala someday. Great job with the description - the show, don't tell technique is clearly evident here. Since this is still a WIP, I understand the occurence of misspellings and missing punctuations. Some minor fixes and this book will surely be a next favorite! :)"
Good Beginning
"Interesting story so far - it could probably use a good edit, but otherwise, I enjoyed it."
