What is your opinion?
GHOSTER
"LIKES: Portraying a realistic few on the ‘what if’ scenario of gaming and virtual life becoming real in our land of reality. This author has written these pages very well with real thought and detail. Very much a read to. Enjoy. DISLIKES: My mind wigging out on connecting the dots on chapter two. Though it is my fault mostly for reading to late into the night and putting it down for nearly a week before finishing chapter two. So the glitch is all on me. I saw nothing stand out as “a dislike” or “wrong” with this story at all. Welllll…….except for maybe wanting there to be more of a story to read. 😁 WAY RATED: Except for leaving me wanting more this is a massively exciting, well written, amazingly awesome character development, with major story plotted theme written. Sorry I could only give 5🌟 stars in my review. RECOOKED: Hell yeah! Sending it out on my SciFi Twitter account as soon as I am done with this."
Adventure of a virtual/science fiction
"I liked that this story had destinations like to complete quests. Very adventurous and fun, vibrant atmosphere and characters. This is a great storyline, I would suggest that you add it to your reading lists😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁"
Ghoster
"I love science fiction when my nose isn't in a romance book, so this one was great for me! I love your writing style, and the details you included made it better. I really do wish there was more. I love the concept of living in a virtual world. Overall I enjoyed it very much!!"
Review
"Only one chapter?????????? Ibloved it though, the tone, syntax and description lend perfectly to the world you have created. I would love to see this idea expanded on."
Reminds me of a world in an Asimov story
"Maybe I'm biased because I'm into scifi a lot but this is your best story. I wish you could expand more on it. This is just chapter one and I am very intrigued. "
