What is your opinion?
Loved it. Without doubts..
"Why stop there ? Why don't you continue the story? I loved it very much đ..â„ïž"
Great story
"The story is great and interesting "
Great romance
"Great story"
Grammer
"The story was very well thought of but the grammar ,punctuation and writing style was not professional but casual. It can be improved if you a bit more effort."
punctuation and gramma
"Great story, I found it hard to read especially the dialogue. You just need to fix up some spelling errors and the gramma . I enjoyed this book. was a little hard to get though.,.,..,.,.,,..,.,.,, , , , ,.,, , , , , , , ,., , ,.,,,,,"
Jasper and Cloe
"It's quite interesting. . Though I do not think that sort of affair is present in Nigeria. However, it's something new, a new feeling while reading.. I would advice that you take note of the grammer e.g instead of using "counsel" you used "cancel" and some other little mistakes. It's a nice story altogether."
More Work
"I found the story very interesting and I loved the love though there wasn't much story line.The story doesn't look Nigerian There where grammatical errors which need to be corrected and there were places I couldn't tell was talking that needs to be corrected. I would buy it if it is published"
Work
"I feel this is a cute concept but the author has "emotionless" description throughout the book. It definitely needs a lot of work, a little more detailed character development. I hope you make the required changes and publish this book one day, successfully. Good luck! "
Needs work
"It needs a lot of work. I feel like this could be a great story if you just worked on your grammar, punctuation, paragraphing, etc. it didn't make a lot of sense, and the words were all jumbled up. This is a great idea for a story, but I hate to tell you, your not a very good writer. "
Jasper and Cleo
"I found the love story of Jasper and Cleo very interesting. Although there were many grammatical and punctuation mistakes, but the author could write this story much better. The distribution of paragraphs in the story was also mixed up, the author can overcome this mistake by making paragraphs at the right place. Moreover, the preciseness is too much, that is, it would be better if the author would give less details about what's happening in the background. Other than that, the story was great."
Difficult to get through
"Whilst I did like parts of this novel, I found that there was not much of a story line and it was very difficult to get through as the grammar was all over the place. Also the dialogue was quite confusing - I found it difficult to discern who was supposed to be saying each line. Could be a nice story if the grammar was cleaned up."
