Haleys tale

"Is she human or Alien?"

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Really liked it

"I really liked the bits I've read so far. It interests me, why the parents are not able to be together and what will hailey look like when she grows up."

Hayley

"The idea of a child so strong reminded of superman or hulk the sister reminds me of a control freak that she wants everyone like her"

tubby kid

"so far so good little short on specifics but otherwise okay"

I Love the Idea

"Alright, so you've got a great idea. I love that you're talking about an issue that does scare a lot of people and it's very relevant and I was immediately gravitated towards the plot since I can relate to it since I'm growing up in this "Trump America" dynamic. Although, I found the sentences a little choppy and not very descriptive. I could've used a little more backstory on the war and what happened and stuff like that. The dialogue is good and the characters are believable, I just found the writing choppy and I think it would help if you had less simple sentences and replaced them with compound/complex sentences to add more detail and so it flows more. Other than that, I like it!"

Hariey

"I don't like having the novel hijacked by a survey. Will probably find another story to read. The story line is great. Think it is written for a juvenile audience. "

So far so good

"Rather disappointed as to the length of the book and the utter lack of an ending in any means"