What is your opinion?
Great story
"I actually found this story after checking out the author, who I found because he wrote a really great review of another story I read. I was pleasantly surprised to find this, especially as the writing style is great. The details in the setting are great, and the author uses fresh words that aren't the same thing we've all read over and over. The dialogue between characters is realistic, easy to follow, and spaced out nicely. Very few grammatical errors. The only suggestion I would make is to consider adding in some punctuation to assist in the voice behind the words. Using comma's where someone would have a natural pause in their dialogue helps the reader interpret the characters phrases better. (Just my opinion, obviously, and just a suggestion!) "
I think this is a decent start
"I liked that the story doesn't take to long to get started but it feels a little rushed. The characters seem likeable enough and I think with a little redinement it could be a bit better"
