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Savannah and caiden

"Nice story "

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His Legacy

"Needs some editing. Otherwise it’s a good read. I’d like a sequel."

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His legacy

"Absolutely amazing book completely loved it "

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His Legacy

"Wonderful story a white wolf and a black wolf both rare. Both Alfa’s in their own right"

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His Legacy

"If I had not previously read The Alphas Runt,, I will have no complaints save the usual poor editing etc. It would have earned a five star from me cos its an intriguing story But naaaaaaaa, this didn't cut it. It's like a badly copied book of another author when you ain't sure of the facts. I had to keep checking that you're the writer. Did you forget the storyline and plot in The Alphas Runt or you intend confusing people like me who read it back to back? Why make Athena and Liam into devils whereas we all know the Alpha twins put Athena through the wringer but despite that, she remained faithful to them. You also said she destroyed the pack 😳😳😳😳, a pack she came back to rebuild despite wanting to have nothing to do with her mates. The Athena that loved her mates and the park and was ready to do sacrifice herself? Also, she gave birth to twin boys not girls. The other girl who was pregnant gave birth to a girl. So, how did three become 2?. I think you owe we your fans to rewrite this book please. I've never been pissed at an author like I am (I've read all your works by the way ). "

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Intriguing story

"I am thoroughly enjoying this story. The author has created likeable and believable characters. Her descriptive skills bring the setting to life, and the plot moves along smoothly."

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