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What is your opinion?

Vampire dollhouse

"Like it so far.. "

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Vampire doll house

"Good ending"

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Great story 👍

"You can easily imagine your self to be the character 😉, great story"

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I love this story so much.

"Can't stop to read this story. "

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Dollhouse vampire

"I like the written exam"

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Vampire Dollhouse

"Good book but does not compare with the other two. "

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Needs work

"It has so much potential but needs major editing and reworking. Another draft or two and it could be a great story! The grammar and other writing issues make it hard to read. Don't be discouraged! Feel free to reach out to me, I wouldn't mind helping edit :) Definitely has potential! It does have an interesting spin on the vampire genre though"

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Basically a discription of a novel

"It’s not a novel but a fast forward description of one."

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Mm ok I gues

"It was ok but rushed."

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