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Amazing

"Your storyline is amazing. I’m no grammar police but that’s literally the only thing wrong is some minor stuff you did you big one girl!! It kept me in as someone who’s going through a lot I need a day mental break down and this helped! But Dax and Ryder guuuurllll the things I would do 🤣🤣 keep writing I’ve read a few of your books your amazing and are going somewhere for sure"

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Crimson Angel

"Love this story it is so good have read it multiple times you are an amazing writer!!"

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Crimson Angel

"Loved the book amazing and compelling characters... An absolute favourite of mine😍 I highly recommend this book if you come across it please read it"

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Crimson Angel

"Amazing writing. I love how the boys all fit differently in her life & how they complement each other. This is a long book & I wasn’t expecting a second book but I’m not complaining! It’s sooo good & I can’t wait to read more! "

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amazing

"this story is absolutely amazing i love reverse harem books and mafia books so this is definitely the best of both worlds to me! i love all of the characters the 4 boys are amazing and i love the twins i hope they get with nat. i mean i guess technically they are triplets but im not talkin bout AJ 😂 shes badass i love her"

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Loveeeee it!!!!

"I truly enjoy reading it… u did a wonderful job, and thank you!!!"

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Awesome

"Loved this book so much, highly recommend- can’t wait to start book 2!!"

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Amazing

"So loving this book can't put it down I'm engrossed with it..I will definitely be recommending this to all my friends"

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Crimson Angel

"Great, great, great! Next please!"

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Crimson Angel

"Absolutely amazing !"

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Crimson Angel

"This captivating novel stimulates reader's rich imagination and is full of action , fast-paced scenes coupled with bad-ass characters and strong chemistry. This is highly entertaining! 👍👍"

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Crimson Angel

"Wow! Excellent book! I couldn't put it down. You are such a talented writer."

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Crimson Angel

"Best book I've read in a long time and I read alot of book. Not just the romance but the background story and depth of the characters are amazing. This is amazingly talented author who not only brings fullness to her characters bit depth to her stories. She concludes everything not just the romance but each gang also, love it "

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AJ isn’t exactly an angel :)

"This book has an original storyline and one badass female lead character. You will find yourself totally immersed in the plot - totally not predictable. And on edge to see what develops between AJ and her 4 (!) boyfriends. "

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Crimson Angel

"This book is amazing! Kept me up for hours and i could not put it down! AJ and her 4 guys are fantastic. The erotica was incredble and a reverse harem is something many women dream 🔥the storyline was intriguing with lots of drama.I cannot wait for the next book. Would definately recommend ❤ "

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Crimson Angel

"I am OBSESSED with this story! I now want my own harem of men because of it lol. All of the main characters are unique and well-developed and the plot had me hooked from the start. Not mention it is HOT 🥵 I seriously cannot wait for book 2."

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Love it!!

"I had read the authors other books on another app and I wondered if she had any more. Thats when I discovered she had his story and holy shit balls I am so glad I found it because this story so captivating it keeps you wanting more. Unfortunately I read it too quickly and now Ive caught up 🤦‍♀️😂 but thats how good it is. Well done dee and thanks for sharing another amazing story."

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Not What I Expected

"I've been a fan of Dee Hanna's work, and this isn't what I expected. It's different from her other stories and I'm impressed to see her break from her old formula. I'm not normally into gang/assassin stories, but Dee makes it fresh and unique. The characters are great, each having their own voice. AJ in particular is a fantastic character, I love her no bullshit attitude. Her being involved in a love square is a plot even she didn't expect and I love how unclear where she's going with this. My only complaint so far is trying to understand the universe it's set in. With all these gangs, I'm just wondering the logistics of it (do police ever get involved, is it a dystopian type of society), but these can be clarified later on. I'm excited to see how it ends:)"

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"Well written....enjoying so far ........."

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