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Enjoying

"I quite like it very much"

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Great imagery!

"Wow, the author has such a good voice and uses such good imagery you feel like you are there with the characters!"

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3rd Person Written Extremely Well!

"I thoroughly enjoyed the author’s writing style. The story had great structure and voice. In my experience, 3rd person has always been at some level of dull. Something I’m glad to have not felt while reading this story, keeping me interested in finding out more. Tiffany’s character kept me wondering what she was going to do next. I would have to say that her character felt a tad bit pushy in some regards. The two main characters’ dynamic slipped into the realms of an unhealthy attachment more times than not. Though I appreciated how the story felt full-bodied without an excessive amount of chapters. The characters grew/changed, but more so on a physical/ outward scale than anything deeper. Kudos to the author if this was the intention."

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