"One Condition"

"Kei, this is actually a conversation more than a story. There is not plot and the end result is two women friends, or lovers, are making plans for Dinner, of a sort, if you will................I would like to see a more complete story line, character development, a defined plot or at least some direction as to where this conversation/story will be headed. I have published 9 books, and can only give you my perspective on how to set up your story to be heard, understood and followed through out its inception...... Also, editing your work before you submit will help eliminate any errors for your readers to dismiss...........Stay positive Kei, and continue your writing. I believe in you and know you will work out the kinks and become famous one day......My Best. william elliott at https://www.inkitt.com/stories/fantasy/185550 Dead or Alive"