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Guardian is really something. The author was having a blast in making this story.

"Really good book. There was already an excitement on the first part that makes you not want to stop. And so I finished it earnestly."

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It was.....good

"This was an excellent story. However the ending was just like a sudden fall into a hole. There was no build up to the ending you just kinda got bored and decided the end the story. It is a little frustrating, because one chapter repeated then suddenly angels showed up and were attacking them in the next chapter. My advic is to fix the chapter repeat and if you have time give us a chapter on how it ends. You are a great writer and a creative thinker. Please keep righting."

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An immersive experience...

"I thoroughly enjoyed this book...the characters are unique and constantly evolving throughout...was a little disappointed with the rushed ending, but otherwise loved it!"

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Danh

"Lawd this is getting saucy 😜"

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good

"good"

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The guardian

"I really enjoyed the whole story . It kept me guessing. It did not end like I thought . It makes me think it might be another ending out there, but I would recommend it to others it is a good read. "

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Awesome

"What a great story!!!! Demons and angels involved with a young girl who brings the two together. I love this story. I can’t put this book down even for a second. I have to finish it…that’s how good it is. Should be published!!!! Great job author "

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The Guardian

"Really good read, but since I already read the one about Leda and Cal is a demon in THAT one , it's hard to make sense of this one ⁉️ GREAT writing though 🥰! ❤️ and ✝️🛐 s"

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The guardian

"Not what I expected and that’s not a bad thing! I was rather surprised by this one as I didn’t see half of the plot twists coming. Delightful and thoughtful look into questions of morality among other things. Rather open ending so I’m hoping for more perhaps 🤔 another sequel?"

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The guardian

"Absolutely amazing book completely loved it ❤ "

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The Guardian

"I really enjoyed this story, and the characters. You did a great job. Can’t wait for more."

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Loved it

"Yet another winner by the amazing author. Loved the twists and turns! Definitely hoping for a book 2 of this one!"

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The Guardian

"I just started reading this novel. The words were flawlessly interwoven to stimulate my profound interest and wild imagination. It is so good, I can't pass up an opportunity to share this. Now, back to this enthralling story.👍👍"

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Wow

"Really enjoyed this book! Unique and interesting characters. Highly recommended!"

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The guardian

"All in all this was an all right book. Thank you so much for writing it ☺️"

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Interesting

"I chose this because its interesting "

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Interesting, with a load of suspense!

"I liked that I couldn't figure out what exactly was happening until mentioned in the book, that said I was literally on the same page as the protagonist. I would suggest the book to one of my fellows interested in paranormal and fiction. So far it's been an interesting enough book to keep me on my toes."

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The Guardian

"A slow and somewhat confusing story at the start and the ending feels incomplete like there really should be a book 2. HOWEVER, the plot and the story itself is addictive and beautiful reading. I'm very glad I persevered with it and the final outcome made me happy, I think...? Lol. I'm happily following this author as I believe she has a lot more to say "

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I like the cover

"It's definitely better written than a lot of stuff on here. Punctuation is great, the writing style is readable, and the cover is beautiful. I see it going pretty far. Just wish the main character had some bigger goals in mind before the love interest is reintroduced. I like that he inspires her art and what she does, if only it was a bit more. I like the conflict of tying in her brother's death with being alone, and how she resents the fact he wasn't there, but I kind of wish there was more than just the 'feeling bad' trope. She's so eager to keep her 'guardian' after she tells him she's bitter she had to go through that death alone. Maybe she could turn it into a false belief that her guardian angel was there to protect her ALWAYS, and by extension her brother, but might be bitter about the fact that her own naivete betrayed her trust. I can see this getting published if the plot is a bit more fleshed out."

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First Inkitt Book

"Enjoying it so far! "

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