What Brings Tomorrow

B.arch

23 chapters read

Would've preferred a bttr n happier ending...

"Enjoyed the bk altho it seemed like it wasn't finished like more chapters r needed for the happy ending..."

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BethRose

23 chapters read

Fantastic

"Some spelling mistakes, but in general really well written "

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What brings tomorrow

"Like it a lot. Straight to the point, no beating around the bush. Would like to know how she is coping ... at the end we all had certain experiences were we jump into conclusions before thinking what's next. Good story... "

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22wasofi10

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What bring tomorrow

"I love it so much and it's so amazing and very fun to read it all the day before the bedtime stories of your life and I love it so much and I hope your having fun with your friends or family and best friends I have fun with the story so much "

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Updat

"Just need to finish the story!!"

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Good book to read

"Good book to read with simple language "

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Sunita Ahuja

22 chapters read

A new start

" Narration is good. A little abrupt ending.character building can be improved. "

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Susie.

23 chapters read

Not finished?

"I was really in to it but I came to the end. It doesn't seem finished to me. I would have liked it to have been longer."

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kaiA_Dijah

23 chapters read

What brings tomorrow

"Reading this story was such a fresh way to spend my day. It's not too lengthy, straight into the plot and leaving me wanting to read more. I've been hooked right from the start and have to say, this is beautiful. "

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Nicolene vd Merwe

"This story should have a proper ending. It feels as if the story ends in the middle"

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What brings tomorrow

"I was prepared to give this five stars but what kind of an ending was that? The ending felt more like the middle of story and left WAYYYY too many unanswered questions! I'm extremely angry and really feel like my time was wasted! It doesn't even deserve one star!!"

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