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The Brief Bandits

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Summary

She'll be the Robin hood of their story but who will be the Robin hood of hers. __________________________ Written through a third person narrative, we get to see the life of sick Josie, who is battling cancer, and her little Down Syndrome brother as they traverse back and fourth to an alternate dimension where they are apart of a group of most wanted bandits. In their fantasy land they are heroes, feeding the hungry and bringing justice to an old town, but once they return they are again faced with the striking truth that Josie is still fighting for her life.

Status
5yrs ago
Chapters
9
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

A Brief Note

A BRIEF NOTE


This book or as I always rather to say 'this story' is my first one which is written in third person narrative. As a nineteen year old we usually tend to use first person because we are more comfortable in that lane.


This however is not in first person. I am still writing this and can it has been a challange. The research has been very complicated. How can one research about children who have cancer and disablities and not cry? Second challange is having to remember it's in third person and person feelings aren't necessary as per say if it was written by the actual protagonist.


Needless to say this is just a brief note to let you all know to go easy with me in the comments because this is my first time in this genre but to also let you know that I am open to corrections and suggestion.


Thank You!



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