Inkitt
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What is your opinion?

I really like the plot

"The story is really good but it goes by just a bit too slow but overall its really good!"

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😶‍🌫️

"This is pretty good, but hey at least she got them hot af guys wanting her"

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Could be better but I still love it!

"I love it and it is funny. I think my sense of humor is now broken. I love the plot. I love how things are going. I would recommend that you seperate the long paragraphs into shorter ones so the story would be more interesting to read. The punctuation marks, capitalization and some of the grammar aren't used correcly. But overall, I still love your story."

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