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Powerful!
"This should be a movie! You are talented! It is that good! Keep it up! It is visual! It grabbed me! Don't give up!"
Fun with Philip K Dick Flare
"How to kill a cyborg is a very unique story, although there are clearly elements of inspiration from Dick's "We'll Remember it for you Wholesale" and "Do Androids Dream of Electric Sheep". The grammar could use some work but that is a minor critique. A bit too many characters to keep up with but this is the first chapter, and it's clear the author is trying to immerse the reader in a specific mindframe and world. Give it a read even if you like The Terminator series!"
tales of the union
"Not Bad But you ramble on.. you lost me..So do not drag it on embellish it make the story more than it is. You can do it good luck you do have talent"
