The Little Boy In The Window
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The Little Boy In The Window

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Summary

Coraline, is babysitting, an eight year old, Carlos. His mom is worried about him. He has been acting very strange lately... Coraline hi to figure out this problem. Police, ambulances, firetrucks, FBI agents and SWAT members, are all involved... What is going on? What is wrong with Carlos?

Genre
Horror,Humor
Author
Chloe_W
Status
5yrs ago
Chapters
1
Rating
5.0 (2 reviews)
Age Rating
13+

Babysitter

Coraline paced around her apartment, talking on the phone. Her older brother on the other end of the line. She walked from her bedroom, to the bathroom, to the kitchen, and the living room. She suddenly stopped. Listening to the sound of her brother's words, trying to comprehend them, on the other end of the phone line.


"What?... what?" She asks, "I can't understand you. I-"

Beep, beep.

"I can't understand what you're saying... James? James?"

Ding dang darn darn dang!, she thinks.

There is a knock on the door, and she rushes to answer it. It's Harmony, the woman, that is paying her to baby sit her young, 8 year old son.


Coraline takes the boys hand, and smiles. She helps him get set up with, snacks and TV, on the big plush rocker, right beside the couch, in her living room. She then goes to talk to Harmony, who has been watching, worriedly.


"Coraline, I-" Harmony starts.

"I know. Your scared for your son. Leaving him with a fourteen year old, isn't the best idea, in your opinion, But you also know... that I've baby sited Carlos numerous times before! He's safe with me. I promise."


"No, no, no. It's not that, I just-" she sighs, takes in a deep breath, lets it out, then takes in another huge amount of air, that seems like two hole gallons, then starts speaking very quietly, and very, very fast, "It's just, that he's been acting very, strange lately, and I'm scared, for him. Yes, you've gotten that part right."


She stops talking as Carlos steps out, "My movie's over!" he says.

"Ok, go sit down, and eat your cookies." says Harmony.

"Ok..." he says a little bit dim.

I finally convince Harmony that Carlos will be 'alright', and she grabs her bag, starts for the door, then suddenly stops. "Remember, if he acts, even the least bit strange... then you know my number. Call it."


Then she steps out of the apartment, and is gone. Coraline can hear Harmony's footsteps, all the way down the staircase, she can hear Harmon's car door slam shut, her car start, and pull out of the drive.


Caroline went back inside. She played another movie for Carlos, and she then, fell asleep.

Let Chloe_W know what you thought about this chapter!

Ellaroselynn
Ellaroselynn

Can't wait for the next chapter!!! Love it!

5 years
Chloe_W
Chloe_W

Thanks! I'll try to update, as soon as I can! (:

5 years
sports_is_the_best
sports_is_the_best

hello

5 years

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