Inkitt
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"As a young writer myself, Good story! But in my opinon, Your grammar needs a lot of work. It was har to try to understand what you meant! I'm sorry if english isn't your first language but.. good story overall! I am so very happy to read this today! Thanks for putting time into a effort filled book!"

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