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What is your opinion?
Vibrant
"The story hits the ground running, arousing interest right from the start. It has character, the plot is dynamic, there is tension, and there's a mystery. The flow is clear, and there is a real sense that dad cares for his "butterfly." I think there's a technical issue where episode 3 is included in episode 2 and then repeats itself. It confused me at first On a personal note, I do like stories with some element of magic included. Many of my heroines wield it."
Interesting magical world
"I love fantasy and time travel and magic so this story is very appealing to me. I think it starts off strong, I’m enjoying the characters and hope the author will come back with direction in mind and reveal more depth in the characters. "
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