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Broken Vows

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Summary

When twins Clara and Daniel spot their missing (feared dead) mother, they're elated that Ahd has returned after vanishing three years ago. But when Ahd frames the twins for their father’s gruesome murder and disappears again, Clara and Daniel realise their mother isn’t itching for a reunion—she’s out to destroy them. Not only were Clara and Daniel the only people in the house with their father when he died, but they also both have devastating secrets and misdeeds their father was close to sharing with the police. According to investigators, his death wasn’t an accident. And worse, the person they claim did it can't be found. It is the death knell. With Ahd in hiding again, and no one else having seen her, trying to prove she's alive and that she's the real assailant drops them down a rabbit hole of deceit that raises chilling questions about those around them. They must decide if the risks are worth justice for a father who'd betrayed them. And when the drastic threads start to culminate in a treacherous showdown with Ahd, they realise why she wanted her husband dead... and worse, Daniel agrees. Clara doesn't. BROKEN VOWS, told from alternating POVs, is a YA thriller (90 000 words). If One Of Us Is Lying and The Girl On The Train had a baby who was raised by Gillian Flynn, the result would be Broken Vows.

Status
Complete
Chapters
3
Rating
5.0 2 reviews
Age Rating
18+

A worried Father

Broken Vows

A novel

By

Jessica Cue-Ann

Clara Addas

Mama left in the middle of the night. No goodbye. No promised visits. Just a three sentence letter addressed to Papa:

Zayed,

I’m leaving. Don’t come looking for me. Being a wife and a mother is not for me, so ... bye.

Ahd.

No one knew about it except my brother and me. Papa made sure of that.

Today is the three-year anniversary of her ‘disappearance’. Maybe that was why dawn found me awake.

The sun has wiggled through the small cracks of the blinds. I’m curled up like a fetus in its mother’s womb, knees digging into my chest, but still can’t ward off the chilling cold.

Mama and I didn’t have the mother-daughter spa treatment kind of relationship; I’ve always been a daddy’s brat. She lived for my brother—I’ve always known if it came down to it. If she absolutely had to choose, it’d be Daniel. She’d throw me to the wolves, no second guessing, if it meant saving my twin.

I don’t hate her for it. This is how all parents are. They have a favourite.

My phone rings. Like a football kicked too hard, I roll to my side and peer at the screen. It’s a restricted number, which I would normally ignore, but for some reason, I feel compelled to answer.

I’ve been receiving these weird phone calls for over a month now. Always at five o’clock. Never a second later. Always on the dot.

“Hello,” I say, keeping my voice cautious.

“He killed her.” The voice warns, deep and slow.

I ignore that. He’s been saying the same thing for close to a month and a half now.

“Who are you?” The question holds more interest for me than anything he ever said.

“I’m the guy hired to kill you.”

The thump of my heart overwhelms the surrounding darkness.

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