Alliance: A Hero's Journey

Sls

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Dec 8, 2016

Original Story

"This tale was timeless and very original. At times, it seemed like you could tell what would happen, but then something else would spring up and all you could do was hope for the best. The plot and settings were all very exciting, and it was easy to teleport into the story. The characters each had their own special knack about them, and it was so very easy to love them. It is almost as if they are real and I will just run into one of them randomly. There are numerous fantasy tales out there, but there are few that capture the heart so quickly. I think this was one of those, as it pulled me in from the first chapter. I would definitely recommend this book to any looking for a heart-warming but also nail-biting, legendary fantasy tale. It is a perfect read for any time. I look forward to any similar works from the author. Happy reading!"

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christineheart

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Nov 15, 2016

Back in time

"I loved the beginning of the story, the great scene setting. Starting with the description of happy, peaceful circumstances somehow implies that it is not going to stay that way for a long time. I loved the twist of circumstances. Characterization is good, done both through the narrator and through dialogues which serve to point out certain traits and features of the characters. The narrator usually simply describes the things that are happening, but even then, the readers get to know the characters and can deduce some of their qualities. In this sense, the style of writing is commendable and it gives a good flow to the story, adds to its readability and keeps the readers interested. A story about a brother and sister going through everything and anything at such early age is something that always arouses interest with readers. This is because it was our reality once, our predecessors’, to be precise, but most of us never had the chance to really get to know that kind of a world. I loved that the ending is pretty happy."

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