Inkitt
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Very engaging and suspensful!

"READ NOW! Fantastic story, lovable characters, smooth and enjoyable writing! Following this author!!"

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Loved it!

"Loved it all in all but felt you could correct the mother plot a bit! Still amazing story! Thank you! "

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Love and Revenge

"Good story and interesting plot. I like Will’s character. He is the most sensible person. There are some typing errors that making some parts are confusing; for example Annie’s mother died of car accident, not cancer (couldn’t remember which chapter). The last chapter, Becca stood and investigated the noise at the hospital door but she was already dead. Jaime and James.. same person? A very talented writer. Look forward to reading your other stories. Well done 👍🏼 😊"

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Great story!

"Really interesting story, love the writing! "

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