Shatters

"I wish that when aliens come to Earth they behave like the guys in this story and mingle with us humans. I really like where you’re going with this novel, and I love how instances from everyday human life are interspersed throughout the story. The character development is spot on, and because Mark and I are the same age, I can totally relate to him. I also like the character Marshall Korannah, because he’s calm and composed throughout the story. So every time you tell the story through his eyes, you take a neutral stance and all the aliens and other weirdness in the book seems so natural. On another note, I think you need to work a little on your sentence structuring as some of the sentences are quite convoluted and difficult to comprehend. You also need to be more careful when you’re proofreading and remove spelling and grammatical errors that I found while reading this novel. Besides these minor issues, it’s a great book and I hope to read more of your work!"