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"This is a great idea I would love to see more of it. This could really turn out to be an amazing story I feel like I am left hanging and would love a happily ever after! "

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Short yet I loved it ❤️

"Truth or Dare?... I can honestly say I've enjoyed reading just two pages because it a came together beautifully. Tracy supposed to be a best friend but turned out to be one to intentionally hurt her by kissing her crush. Louise and Mason lost years apart on what could of have been...knowing it was nothing but meaningless relationship. Years later, the question remains" Is thier chance for these two when it's always been you?" Or the fact Mason searched six months after Tracy's drunken confession on hurting her ex best friend, Louise. For Mason to see the snake she truly was...to see the fool he was for using her to stay close with Louise. Until the disappearance... That's the thing about life.. not everyone has good intentions for you in the end for you. They don't have good values on life/morals because they were taught it; just didn't use it. Or they weren't taught it at all...therefore thier heart wasn't in the right place. All they had was beauty on the outside yet was ugly on the inside. Tracy had a plan, it backfired. She used that weakness of Mason's by hurting her best friend. Still lost a friend because its obvious Tracy didn't deserve Louise as a friend. When a second chance comes along, do it right. You can be young, and foolish to make rash decisions. Ultimately, that's history learned from the past. What you do now is what counts so you aren't making the same mistake again. Everything happens for a reason. Way to late for seeing it. Waste 5 years with someone who was ugly in thier heart to do a malice act like that... I'm glad everything turned out the way it did. Now let 5 years of being together or more count knowing that's the person who completes your world. It's not just about survival."

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Truth or Dare

"Truthfully, I want more of this! Hope you will! Thank you for sharing! 💕💕💕"

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Truth or Dare (A Short Story)

"A sweet and simple story that is very good and I was said that it ended but glad that it ended on a happy note!"

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Truth or Dare

"Short and sweet "

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sweet

"Hi. The story was so good. I didn't want it to end. But there were some minor grammatical errors. Otherwise, it was perfect. Please write more of these."

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Truth

"Good but short"

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