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Four Friends in a imaginary world

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Summary

a story of three friends exploring the imaginary world inside their closet full of color,imagination,friends and foes!

Status
4yrs ago
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

The beginning of something great

A stormy morning was just clearing up at 7:00 mid-summer. Usually nobody would want to run through wet slimy grass but Milo was excited today, He and his friends arranged a meeting that was supposed to start as early as Milo could wake up. Milo was running to his friends house after he ate breakfast. He counted them as the siblings he’d never had. Lily was 13,the younger sister of Carmen (by 3 months). She had long dark brown hair and blue eyes She likes to wear anything with cats on it, She likes to run (and can possibly out run the neighborhood dogs.). As for Carmen,he was 13,tall with black hair and a pink highlight. He usually carries around a sewing kit in case he gets bored. He likes to wear dark neon clothes (that he makes) other than that, He likes sweaters and cooking,

“Lily! Carmen! Are you there??” Milo excitingly said as he waited for response. Just as he was about to yell again a ladder slowly descended from his friends window as Lily held up a quiet symbol. As he climbed up the ladder Lily began pulling it back inside so nobody would see them. “Ah hello Milo.” Carmen said as he turned away from his sewing project. “Oh wait! Since everyone is here can we try the ritual?” Lily said picking up the groups travel bags.“i think we’re ready to go,Wait..where’s Pezian..?” Carmen said as he picked up a bag. “they’re right here!” Lily said while picking up a stuffed toy. “then we’re all set!” Carmen said as he handed Milo the stuffed plush. “Are we ready to depart..?” Milo said while picking up the stuffed deer/wolf plush.

The four of them began to head to the closet, If this didn’t work they would spend those two weeks studying all for nothing. “Is everyone ready?” Carmen said holding his bag tight. “I think so” Lily replied. “Well here goes nothing..” Milo said ready for anything that would happen. “3 ... 2... 1..” Carmen counted as they jumped in....

(to be continued)

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