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Visionary
"Even though this story is sci-fi and fantastic, it is clearly relatable to today’s time and world and to any time in history, to be precise, since there were always and there were always be people who doubt any kind of system and who cannot be blamed for it, to be precise. The story is futuristic, interesting and made me wonder if something similar to this can really be expected in the future. This story might just be a vision. A vision that you conveyed and depicted in a great manner, so that I could not stop reading. It is dynamic, exciting and thrilling. Your style of writing is great, but I would suggest a little more proofreading, since I’ve come across a few mistakes. There aren’t a lot of them, but why not make it perfect? Overall, this is an intense story, carries a strong message and it is well worth reading."
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