What is your opinion?
Keep Up The Good Work!
"I love it! You write it so well how tommy changed during the exile, I love how you write that when he got to techno's techno gave him a potato. I love that you put warnings at the start as many people don't do that. I also admit those warnings do fit well however. I am excited to see what you have to offer. I just hope you dont push yourself and rush chapters as rushing is where most mistakes will happen. But overall I'm liking it currently!"
Niceeeeee
"I like that you took you time to make sure you spelled everything correct /J but I like ur writing style and how well it is connected to lore! I would recommend this to people who support Tommyinnit in his fight against Deeam and the people why don't like his on the server. Because the plot is nice and you made sure to have proper punctuation on this"
Only one chapter no story
"Hhhhhhhhhhghgh hhhhhhhhhhghgh I am sorry I didn't 6yThere was another shooting right next to our houseWelcome to Gboard clipboard, any text you copy will be saved here.Tap on a clip to paste it in the text box.Touch and hold a clip to pin it. Unpinned clips will be deleted after 1 hour.Use the edit icon to pin, add or delete clips."
