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"I am expecting many things from this story! You can publish it on NovelStar, just submit your story to [email protected] or [email protected]"

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Fantastic!

"First off, I don't read Supernatural unless there is a Vampire with the name of Lestat or a Mayfair witch. I wasn't expecting to like anything about this story but by chapter 1, I was already hooked. It takes real talent to write with such thrilling suspense, at such a galloping pace. It was like eating popcorn, one kernel at a time, with tons of gooey butter and craving more. So for pace: A+, character development: A+, intrigue and suspense: A++, plot A+, the story structure was off the charts and so fitting to the story. therefore the grade would be a Ph.D. Excellent work, Nicole."

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loved it

"i loved the plot line and all of it really! I just wish there had been a little bit more at the end, like a marriage after they get to know eachother (again) you know, something to spice it up!"

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Loved it!

"I absolutely loved this read! I would recommend this to anyone looking for Supernatural Fanfiction, Romance, Action, or just an escape from everyday life. Amazing ending as well. 10/10"

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Brothers Keep Her

"this story had me in tears, happy, sad its an emotional roller coaster to say the least"

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AWESOME

"AWESOME STORY. You are a great writer! This one of the best supernatural fanfiction I have read in a while!"

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Brothers Keep Her

"This was the most beautiful thing ever! Almost like the episodes! You are fantastic please write a part 2!"

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Brothers keep her

"This is an amazing book! I highly reccomend it. I could not stop laughing or smiling. Thank you so much!"

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