Inkitt
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It’s sooooo good I need an update

"I neeeeeddddddd updatessssssss"

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Good

"It's really good right now I really really really like the book "

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Tainted

"I love this book so far I’d probably recommend this to a couple of my friends and maybe my mother I like the big green back-and-forth between the two kinda wondering why they have to protect her because of these guys want to kill her and her brother so what did her brother do I just can’t get over that somebody’s trying to kill them both and not knowing why when he supposed to be a businessman now I can’t wait till you get another update thank you"

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catchy so far! 🤗

"catchy story so far! Characters are are not that standard and I like te conversations in the novel. Hope the story continues 🙏🏻 "

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Great read

"Fun to read and very inteet. Page turner. "

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Very Entertaining

"I don't usually write reviews often, but I happened to give this a chance and I really liked it. The writing style is good, and easy to follow. I like the characters so far, and I really hope to read more of this story. Will be lending my support to this author, for more great books!"

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Tainted

"This book was amazing. I really want to keep reading it over and over again. I loved how she was acting towards him at the beginning she is fiesty"

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Tainted

"So far I really do like it. It has a nice flow and an intriguing plot. Can't wait for more!"

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MNM

"Waiting for a continuation. It has a good flow and suspense to it which is interesting and keeps us on toes"

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THIS WAS AMAZING

"You did so great! I absolutely want more chapters please post some more"

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Tainted

"Good story line, well written."

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Tainted

"Such a cliffhanger! Can't wait for the next update soon! :D"

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Love the story, wish there was more

"I love your story I hope you finish it soon"

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Tainted

"Too abrupt but the writing style is good."

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