Chapter titles - well done!!

"The first thing I have to mention is that I am simply fascinated by the fact that you chose really good song titles for your chapter titles and how they are amazingly appropriate for the stories in the chapters. This is really great, I love it. I also love how the story about Khvarikx completely grabs my attention, how I delve into it and then it gets interrupted by the “real world” (although it is also a fantasy) and carries me over to the bar, where the characters are talking. You have the ability to explain so unusual thing in ways that would never occur to me but seem logical when you tell them, even though it is all fantastic – such as when you explained that time travel is the reason they are all alive after being killed. This somehow makes the reader believe you and it also makes the story interesting and intriguing. Overall, I think this is a thrilling story and I’ve enjoyed it."