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Wow!!!!!

"This story was very suspenseful and well written. The author really switched things up from her usual writing style. I say that because this story had no sexual details and was sad. I still enjoyed it, but I’m a fan of smut and happy endings, no pun intended."

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Unexpected end

"It was very interesting and very suspenseful but I wish it was longer and had more details. "

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Parasomnia

"Holy hell! This was a quickie. Extremely talented writer. I’ve enjoyed your romance novels but this was just WOW! Such a good thriller! Kept me on the edge of my seat. I salute you! 🫡 "

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Wow…. Just WOWO

"I had figured it out after is first chapter but never saw the ending coming. That was insane. Great job keeping me on edge. Definitely didn’t see Christopher’s death or hers coming. But knew it was all the same. Excellent job. This is why I am on ur patreon as well. Your absolutely amazing "

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Parasomnia

"Loved the book total surprise in the end should have quessed how it was going to end but that would have been to obvious we’re always looking to be fooled. And yes great job I was fooled. Great writing. Thanks 🌻"

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I did not expect this

"The story is good and the ending was quite unexpected. I enjoyed it and I think it would have been even better if the story had more details about the main characters, their actions and their motives. "

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Parasomnia

"Really good story. Simple and sweet with a great plot and a greater ending. "

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Taut and thrilling

"Cool premise and story. The "him" chapters were pretty chilling and gave a great insight into a demented mind, definitely had me scared for what would happen next. Joy's unstable sleep schedule also caused this creepy sense of unease. That also left a lot of possibilities open, and kept me guessing. Compared to a lot of what I read here, the dialog was good, concise, and actually helped develop each character. I won't post spoilers because I want other to be hit with this like I was, but I loved what you did with the last chapter! Good on you for going the unconventional route, and I hope you keep it up and look forward to more of your work."

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Intense

"I just started and cannot stop! The story has pulled me in, I can't wait to find out what is going to happen next - each chapter brings on a new sense of anticipation, wondering what is really going on!!!! Such a great story!"

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Thriller to the CORE

"This book had so many twists and turns, not once did i know what was going to happen next. Had my heart jumping and my mouth hanging. Overall amazing!!"

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very good, suspenseful

"From the first sentence I was hooked, the plot is not what you think it will be. It kept me on the edge of my seat..."

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