What is your opinion?
The passion house
"More of this story please and see how it ends thanks good story love it so far keep them comin keep please 🤗🤗"
Great!
"I really liked it overall. The plot reminds me of Inception a bit, but it's still very original. I like all the characters and it was a little difficult for me to keep track of everybody, but that's okay the only way to really ease that is to have less characters or introduce them more slowly, but that's just a personal preference. The only real criticism I have is you have these large blocks of just text and sometimes when you just see a wall of words it's easy to lose your place when you're reading, so I'd try to break up the bigger chunks just to make it a little easier on the eye. Great job overall though!"
Dream land
"It's interesting and exciting "
