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The Queen's Weakness

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Summary

❝Mean girls have hearts too... until someone breaks them.❞ She was the queen bee, and he was the golden boy. They were the school's power couple even though they weren't dating. They were friends... with benefits of course. You know how these things go: one of them falls in love. And Addelyn Frederick fell hard for her best friend, Blake Vanderbilt. What happens when the new girl, Miss. Goody-two-shoes captures Blake's attention? Will the cliche take over and destine the player with the good girl? To what extent will Addelyn go to re-write that destiny? ❝They say love is weakness. And Blake Vanderbilt is her weakness.❞

Status
5yrs ago
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

Prologue

Let me introduce myself, I am Addelyn Frederick, the Queen Bee of my school. The one who is respected by all. The girl who has everything one could ever want: A gigantic house, expensive cars, designer clothes, the good looks and the perfect boyfriend.

My life sounds great, doesn’t it? Well, let me tell you, it’s a nightmare.

The gigantic house; my parents abandoned me in it.

The expensive cars and designer clothes; a bribe from my lovely parents so that I won’t destroy their company’s reputation. I swear, their company is more of a child to them than I could ever be.

The good looks; just another reason for people to want me for my body and not for who I am.

And my perfect boyfriend; he’s just my friend with benefits.

Unfortunately, I had to be totally dumb and fall in love with him. But I couldn’t help it. How am I supposed to resist that big smile he gives me every time my eyes lock with his bright blue ones? And the way he kisses me never fails to make me feel wanted. And why does he always keep saying the right things, making me fall deeper and deeper in love?

And he is all mine.

Or at least he was, until a certain dove-eyed nerd stomped all over my life.

She was perfect, in every way that I wasn’t.

She wore glasses, giving her an innocent look. I wore high pointed heels, making me look like the devil. A hot devil though.

She never wore make-up and thus she was all natural. I loved make-up and that made me “fake”.

She hates partying, so naturally people think she’s smart. But I love partying, so that means I’m just another dumb blonde even though I’m the top of my class.

She’s quiet and that automatically makes her sweet. Well, me, I’m just mean. I won’t disagree with that.

She probably has zero experience with boys whereas I’m the one who can get any guy I want.

Then how come she’s the one who gets the only guy I’ve ever wanted?

With her walking in, my life has turned into one big cliché where at the end, I would be the only one left without a happily ever after.

So, thanks, big guy watching over me from the heavens. Thank you so much, for this wonderful life.


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