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Warrior

"There were a few writing errors (mostly the names), nothing major and nothing that can't be solved with a little eddeting... Overall i loved your book and i hope you keep writing...."

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Warrior

"Absolutely loved this fantastic story. Well written and one of the best I've read for a while. There's humour, drama, a bit of naughty and just over all a truly wonderful read. LOVED it!"

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Warrior

"The author is very expressive in the details. It is the futuristic story with romance added on to it. Luv that the female protaganist is a strong character who knows what she wants... Though there are a few technical errors noted."

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Best book I’ve read

"Loving it, I hope there is a 2nd book"

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Great book

"Great book, loved the characters and the story was lovely to follow and very interesting. Really hope theres more books to come. "

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Warrior

"I must say this novel was a pleasure to read. It had the right amount of drama and the characters were mature and didn't have unnecessary conflict. Oh how I loved reading this novel, it just warms my heart especially the last chapter. I must thank the author for making this brilliant piece of art. (I might sound exaggerated but this is my honest review)"

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Warrior

"You are truly an amazing writer. I love your stories. I can't wait to read more from you. "

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Warrior

"One of the best books I’ve read. Hoping for more. "

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Amazing!!!

"I truly appreciate your time and effort, I love this story "

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OMG

"I am so glad I chose to give this book a chance!! It's awesome!! I just can't seem to stop reading I want more!!!"

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Warrior

"Loved the story. "

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Warrior

"This was a very good book I’d recommend it to anyone that likes fictional books. "

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Warrior

"Such a fun innovative story I really enjoyed it😊👍❤️"

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Warrior

"You get fantasy, romance & comedy all in one book. It's great!"

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Warrior

"I really enjoyed reading this book! The characters are very consistent. They have been developed fairly well. So as how the plot got built up. Reading it had been a pleasure! Looks forward to read another one from you. -axpoz "

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Warrior

"I truly enjoyed your story. The world you created was one I greatly enjoyed learning more about. I felt that there could have been a little drama and suspense regarding trying to capture the female lead, and when it came to the betrayal by the kings. However your story was quite enjoyable. I would love to see a follow up novel with maybe some conflicts surrounding the two major characters and their heirs. Great job"

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WARRIOR

"You have got to write more of these. I really needed something to relax with."

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Wonderful story 😘

"Thank you so much for for this!😘"

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Fantasticccccccc

"How dare you made me curious like crazy all the way from the start till the finish line. I hate it that it have to stop here, but all in all, you're good at what you're doing. Keep going!"

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Warrior

"Good story liked it a lot could read more like this but found that certain Areas were grammatically different like there were two writers one without a good command of English "

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