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Appreciation and Commission Request

"Hi! I’m Eloise, a digital artist passionate about visual storytelling. I just read your story and was completely pulled in the emotion, the world, the characters it all played out in my head like a comic. I’d love to collaborate on adapting a scene into a short comic! I focus on expressive characters and impactful layouts, and I think we could create something really special together. I charge reasonably and am happy to share samples of my work if you're curious. No pressure just wanted to say how much I loved your writing and share the idea. Feel free to reach out on Discord: luansousa8287. "

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Amazing characters

"The characters are amazing. They are well written and beautifully detailed. The love and vulnerability between the two main characters is as cute. It make me jealous. "

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Please finish

"You need to complete the book please just remember you are climax don't kill the story"

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Amazing

"Very good course of action, details and story"

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Mercy of the moon

"The book is actually great the Grammer the tension suspense keeps me wanting more and more "

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Mercy of the Moon

"Wonderful story so far. Loved most of the detail included, a few parts maybe a little too much detail, like of the food and cooking, but then again I'm not really a foodie. Can't wait for more!"

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Hot

"Very well written. Can not wait to see if they are fated mates."

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Reading

"It's really how the details make you feel that you are part of the story this feeling the passion. Love it "

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Mercy of the moon

"The book is a good story, but what you all should say to us is that there will be a northern book on such a date hiw long do we have to wait for the follow-up. "

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Loving it, so very good!

"Loving it, my new favourite. Love, love love!"

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Hot!!!

"Whew that water scene had me almost panting! Kudos to the author for writing it as if we are in the same room watching the events unfold!"

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Dying to see more

"Really love this you put a lot of thought into this and her world I like the thought they are both the last of the first line the true bloods if you will. I wonder why all of her line was killed why were they so hell bent on ending them all wth… something is about her blood line."

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Thoughts thoughts

"Can't wait for next update. I know your busy but I'll be checking constantly "

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Best werewolf Story i have read on here so far

"Not at all like the usual werewolf stories. Great writing style and creative plot . I really enjoyed this :)"

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Nice and Enthralling Plot

"Totally enjoying this! I love the way the story keeps building. Keep it up 👍"

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